OmniBlaster 1 Year Anniversery Addition help

I was replying to a post for someone who was wanting some critique and a poster there gave a really good analysis of problems in the app description.

I know for me, this is a personal failing, and it would be super nice if someone would take a look at OmniBlaster’s description and offer me some suggestions. Also if there are some keywords I should be using that would be great too.

I’m getting ready to send in 1.8 which ads some new features and some additional retina iPad graphics and I’m shooting to release it on 5/12, the game’s 1 year anniversary.

So now would be a great time to address this.
Mucho thanks in advance!
Rob [import]uid: 19626 topic_id: 25695 reply_id: 325695[/import]