Spanish localization revision - Need native speaker help

Games
#1

Hi everybody!

We releasing our new iPad game Critter Quitter soon (end of this week will be submitted to App Store for approval) and badly need Spanish native speaker help.

We made Spanish game localization (was made by professional translator), but she is no native speaker, so probably there are some glitches.

Could you please go through translation document and make corrections/suggestions if needed. There are screenshots for every game screen, and there is not much text there, because we tried to use artwork everywhere where possible.

Please download translation files here (.doc and .pages format)
http://www.critterquittergame.com/es_critter_quitter.zip

Gameplay trailer:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yrhMYLMhOZo

You can find more info about game here:
http://www.critterquittergame.com/
http://www.facebook.com/CritterQuitter

Of course reviewer’s name will be on Credits screen!

Thank you very much!

Best
Yuri, Critter Quitter Game Director [import]uid: 41764 topic_id: 13965 reply_id: 313965[/import]

#2

I’m doing the review. It is necessary to make many changes, it takes a couple of days.

Could you give me an e-mail address to send you the final doc?
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#3

Hi

Thank getting back so promptly. Please contact me on skipper (at) impulsis (dot) com. Would it be possible to correct it by Friday morning?

Also if you can give me your iPad UDID i can make a build for you, it would definitelly help with revision.

Best
Yuri [import]uid: 41764 topic_id: 13965 reply_id: 51400[/import]

#4

I have reviewed half of the document. I think that will be completed tomorrow at noon

Sorry, but I don’t have an iPad, only an iPhone 3GS. [import]uid: 84597 topic_id: 13965 reply_id: 51403[/import]

#5

Hi

Good news. Thank you! Unfortunatelly this is iPad only game, it would be really hard to play it on small iPhone screen.

Oh, please give me your name, how we should mention you on Credits screen… and just would be good to know name of the person who helps us.

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#6

Hi fnavarro

How is going with revision?

Best
Yuri [import]uid: 41764 topic_id: 13965 reply_id: 51610[/import]

#7

Hi fnavarro
Please update me

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Yuri [import]uid: 41764 topic_id: 13965 reply_id: 51623[/import]

#8

Hi,

I’m sorry but I’ve been very busy today and I’m going to continue the revision now.

I sent you the document in a couple of hours. [import]uid: 84597 topic_id: 13965 reply_id: 51628[/import]

#9

Hey fnavarro

Good to see you online. Can you give me you email or skype plz, so i can contact you directly.

Best
Yuri [import]uid: 41764 topic_id: 13965 reply_id: 51629[/import]

#10

Hi Yuri

e-mail: fnavarro (at) adventureboxstudios (dot) com
Skype: fernando (dot) navarro73

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#11

Hi Fernando!

Thanks for update, look forward to see revision.

I just added you to my skype contacts.

Best
Yuri [import]uid: 41764 topic_id: 13965 reply_id: 51633[/import]